First off thank you for your comments. It means a lot to me when you do and I get you input. Renewal has surfaced in the past but I really like it and because I haven't really given it an explanation it's also a bit mysterious. I really like the name and what it stands for. What do you think? Do you like it or is it a bit too much?
When I first saw the title for this one, I thought of other TG stories without the magical element where it is just someone being forced to use their GF's/Wife's/Twin Sister's clothing, so the fact it wasn't that is good :)
The other Renewal one you did after this was also pretty cool, and the idea that different 'products' work differently is imaginative.
Also, you're pretty good at transformation descriptions, and these work to that advantage with their descriptions of the changes :)
I agree, I know Dee was making a joke about calling "Acme" Like in looney tunes. But it actually gave me an idea when she said that. I thought about all the different products "Renewal" can make and all the possibilities. Maybe you or some of the other members can come up with a few products you would like to see and I will try to cap them..
So is 'Renewal' going to be a new addition to the existing TG mythos you've created? It seems like a good candidate
ReplyDeleteFirst off thank you for your comments. It means a lot to me when you do and I get you input. Renewal has surfaced in the past but I really like it and because I haven't really given it an explanation it's also a bit mysterious. I really like the name and what it stands for. What do you think? Do you like it or is it a bit too much?
DeleteI do like it.
DeleteWhen I first saw the title for this one, I thought of other TG stories without the magical element where it is just someone being forced to use their GF's/Wife's/Twin Sister's clothing, so the fact it wasn't that is good :)
The other Renewal one you did after this was also pretty cool, and the idea that different 'products' work differently is imaginative.
Also, you're pretty good at transformation descriptions, and these work to that advantage with their descriptions of the changes :)
I agree, I know Dee was making a joke about calling "Acme" Like in looney tunes. But it actually gave me an idea when she said that. I thought about all the different products "Renewal" can make and all the possibilities. Maybe you or some of the other members can come up with a few products you would like to see and I will try to cap them..
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